Soynovel thread

[Refining Heaven]

https://justpaste.it/jxhtj

 

[Refining Heaven]

Chapter 1 has officially been released, the link is above.

Criticism is welcomed, I am still human, my writing is going to have flaws, but I hope I can write a story which entertains you all.

 

[tonicGiuseppe]

bump

 

[_73]

https://justpaste.it/jxhtj

Absolute fucking gemerald, I read all of that and it was actually interresting, good job.

 

[tonicGiuseppe]

@'cordstaff pin this effortpost

 

[Refining Heaven]

I will release the new chapter on Sunday, which will be the case for all subsequent chapters.

 

[Klitty]

I will release the new chapter on Sunday, which will be the case for all subsequent chapters.

Oh my gosh it's JUST like my hecking japanese manga...

 

[Dagonet]

Can't wait for an autistic 'teen to make some gemmy fanart of this

 

[Refining Heaven]

Can't wait for an autistic 'teen to make some gemmy fanart of this

That would be nice, but I doubt it. I doubt much people outside of this site will see it, to be honest. I don't mind though

 

[tonicGiuseppe]

Can't wait for an autistic 'teen to make some gemmy fanart of this

the only drawGODS i know are _73 and starving artist

 

[Refining Heaven]

Oh my gosh it's JUST like my hecking japanese manga...

Oh my gosh it's JUST like my hecking Chinese xianxia...

 

[s0yt33n liker]

Add mechs and detailed comedic stuff

 

[Refining Heaven]

Add mechs and detailed comedic stuff

I don't really have an interest in mechs, but what do you mean by "detailed comedic stuff?"

 

[StudioExcréments]

https://justpaste.it/jxhtj

Autistic gemrald i guess

 

[Refining Heaven]

Autistic gemrald i guess

Thank you.

 

[s0yt33n liker]

I don't really have an interest in mechs, but what do you mean by "detailed comedic stuff?"

Unexpected Hyperdetailed (excessive even)gory and grueling death of certain character and detailed execessive descriptions of food and object

 

[Perfect Pepsilord]

https://justpaste.it/jxhtj

I lost it when the galaxy gas noob said: "You are courting death!"

I see we're dealing with a grandpa in the ring situation here, or in this case, fat Italian drug dealer stuck inside of a pinejak.

Grammar is good, no spelling errors that I could catch. The writing felt distinctly like a Chinese webnovel, which I guess is the point.

 

[Refining Heaven]

I lost it when the galaxy gas noob said: "You are courting death!"

I see we're dealing with a grandpa in the ring situation here, or in this case, fat Italian drug dealer stuck inside of a pinejak.

Grammar is good, no spelling errors that I could catch. The writing felt distinctly like a Chinese webnovel, which I guess is the point.

Thank you for your input.

Though, Fruit Ridge Immortal Monarch isn't Froot. Marco Dagowop is Froot. Marco, which people say is his name, and Dagowop (dago + wop.) Fruit Ridge Immortal Monarch is a great expert from Coal Despot (captain coal)'s era. As a reference to how fruitjaks used to be popular, but fizzled out, I decided to include the plot of Coal Despot destroying Fruit Ridge. Marco will be a fruit path cultivator, and revive the path.

And yeah, the Chinese webnovel writing is the point geg. I like Chinese webnovels, and they're what I based my novel on.

 

[Dagonet]

Thank you for your input.

Though, Fruit Ridge Immortal Monarch isn't Froot. Marco Dagowop is Froot. Marco, which people say is his name, and Dagowop (dago + wop.) Fruit Ridge Immortal Monarch is a great expert from Coal Despot (captain coal)'s era. As a reference to how fruitjaks used to be popular, but fizzled out, I decided to include the plot of Coal Despot destroying Fruit Ridge. Marco will be a fruit path cultivator, and revive the path.

And yeah, the Chinese webnovel writing is the point geg. I like Chinese webnovels, and they're what I based my novel on.

So, The other admins would have an appearance too?

 

[Refining Heaven]

So, The other admins would have an appearance too?

Well, they're all dead. But they will talk with Froot in some way.